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It's Friday (just) and here's the fifth and final part of "Modern Love". I did promise, after all.

If you're reading these comments before the thing itself... stop. Go and read it now. Spoilers ahead.


So yeah, hooray for ambiguous endings! Was he mad? Did he just get hit by a piano, run around raving for a few days, jump off a roof and wake up in hospital? Was he in a coma ever since being hit by the piano, only just waking up now? Or did he actually jump forward ten minutes in time, and then jump back at the end?

Who knows? But at least it made more sense than Life on Mars. I thank you very much for reading all 6000+ words of this nonsense. Your support is much appreciated, and I hope you enjoyed it.
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Lol! Nice ending. I like the time travelly debating in the middle -- something I suspect could only really come so succinctly from a long-time Who fan :p -- and also the LOM-spoofery, with the needing-to-save-them and the deciding-to-stay and the jumping-off-the-roof.


Did he just get hit by a piano, run around raving for a few days, jump off a roof and wake up in hospital?

That one!